Sunday, May 16, 2010

Story Pt III: Rock 'n Roll

Okay, I suck at making up titles, but at least I have something for the rest of the story, right? I'm going to try to post a little bit of the story every day this week, just too keep it rolling out. Yeah, that's right. EVERY DAY. It's not that I actually have the time, but I'm in a writing mood, so yeah. I have a basic plan for the story, so that will help. Let's see if I can actually do it though. :)

In the brainstorming, however, I realized just how long this story is going to be, since I'm just dragging it out. Perhaps with this I'll be able to include more characters, but just as a note, I can't really find any convienient place to add any new people in the first few parts of the story, so if you want to be included in here, it'll sadly have to be a little while. But in the meantime, I'll need one or two people who are really interested in science for the part after that. Any volunteers? ^_^


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“Alright then!” Skys said, erasing the whiteboard. “We ready to go?”

“’Course! Let’s rock ‘n roll,” Gummy replied, opening the door to the DeLorean.

“Hang on a second. Help me get all this stuff into the machine.” Skys went to a cabinet in the corner of the lab and heavily dragged out some rather large cases, filled with food but mostly water.

“Why so much water?” Gummy asked.

“The car runs on fuel cells. Gasoline is inefficient and may become obsolete in the future, but no matter where we go, there will always be water, so we’ll never have to worry about a fuel problem. But I’d still like to carry some with us, just in case.”

Fifteen minutes later, everything was all set and ready to go. Skys snapped his laptop into the mount on the dashboard, started the car, and slowly backed out of the lab into the driveway, and steered the car onto the street. Skys traded a nervous glance with Gummy, and a chill ran up his spine.

“So, exactly, how do we get from here to space?” Gummy asked.

“There’s a hideout deep in the mountains about an hour’s drive from here that used to be used for rockets and weapons research back during World War II. As far as I’ve heard of, nobody’s been there since it was decommissioned over 50 years ago.”

“An old abandoned military compound? Isn’t that where scary stuff happens?”

“Like time travel?” Skys suggested as he drove. “Rumor had it that, there, well, there was a division there that also studied time travel. The government had multiple secret projects running throughout the war, doing whatever it needed to gain a technological advantage. Teams studied everything, massive weaponry, time travel, interstellar communications, teleportation, mind reading and mind control, how to control the weather, stuff like that, I think. I don't actually know a lot about it. But I do know that with the success of the Manhattan Project, where the nuclear bomb was developed, all these other projects slowly faded into distant memory, especially once the government stopped funding them when we won the war and no longer had any need for them. I know the Internet came about as a subtle result of their communication studies, and I’ve heard of how people can fly planes to sprinkle certain chemicals into clouds that would cause clouds to rain, snow, or evaporate. But time travel was one of the more powerful ones that was never declassified.”

“Wait,” Gummy interrupted, “If it’s still classified, how do you know about this?”

“You really want to know? I was sorting through our garage a number of years ago, and I came across a box filled with these classified documents, schematics, blueprints, and information in general. I had no idea where they came from, but down at the bottom of the box, I found my grandfather’s ID badge…he was apparently the lead scientist for the time projects.”

“What? Really? He never said anything about it?”

“I’m not really sure what happened to him. I’ve never met him before, and my parents won’t talk about it. Maybe that’s one of the things I can find out on our trip. Anyways, a huge chunk of this car was built according to his blueprints. In a footnote, he mentioned that an operational launching pad was already developed and is hidden here at this compound.”

“Hey, um, Skys, check your mirrors.”

“Huh?” Skys looked back. Red and blue flashing lights approached. Skys groaned.

“Oh come on, what did I do? You can’t pull a car over just because it looks weird, you know!” Skys turned to Gummy and asked, “Should we stop? If we do, who knows what they’ll do to us or to our car?”

Gummy smirked. “The story is supposed to be interesting, not boring, you know. All we've been doing is talking so far. It's time for some action, and this thing has rocket engines, right? Show me how they work!”

11 comments:

  1. lol i LOVE the end! hey, if your characters need a lawyer after this scene, remember: i am an EXCELLENT lawyer :D

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  2. Interested in science? Or interested in Sciencenerdess? The difference is QUITE important...
    Anyway, can't wait 'til you hit the future! President of Everything, remember. President of Everything.

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  3. Can I be someone in the future? I can be a smart@$$ but really sweet :) But make my name Lola or Bruce or Ryane because I don't want to make it Scadoosh.. And I am smart. Oh! You can have the time machine break in the future and I can help you fix it or something like that :D Sound good? Okay, I may sound desperate to be in the story but that's because I kinda am. Please? Put me in the story? I don't want to be the po-po (haha, Madea reference) but I want to be in the story. Just consider it, k?

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  4. yay. why do i get the feeling that you have to explain everything to me?

    i'm glad that even in the story i push you to write the story.

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  5. *thinks*...a lawyer, a president, a smart scientist/car/time machine mechanic, and the person who keeps forcing me to write the story...this is going to be one AWESOME story...

    @jg: actually, we escape from the police into the old military compound, so we're fine for now. but lawyers might come in useful a little later in the story. ^_^

    @scott: science, scott. science. -_- you know, political leaders to have a proclivity to be assassinated occasionally, and I do have this submachine gun you gave me the other day...

    @scadoosh: sure, that's actually a good idea. *signs lola up as the person who saves us when our time machine dies* :D

    @gummy: oh, oops...didn't notice that, sorry I'm just setting up the scene, I guess?? I did notice that all the parts up to now is just talking, so something suspenseful has to happen soon. still not quite sure what, but an empty abandoned military research center sounds like a perfect setting for something like that, right? :)


    just a note, that what I have right now, the next few parts deal with the military compound. (pfft, I'm just dragging this out, but whatever...) we don't actually get into the future for another two or three parts. but once we do, the story becomes really open ended because literally ANYTHING can happen...so I'm not sure what...ideas?

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  6. Very nice Sky, once again. :D
    Well, I like science, but I think if I volunteer to do one more thing in any way, my "to do" list will come to life and start batting me over the head. So I will pass on helping with the story, sorry. :/

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  7. @feathers: I mean to be a character in the story, not helping with the story. :D

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  8. i can help you with the future part when you get there.

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  9. oh also.

    i think that our characters are horrible people.

    we knew we weren't coming back and we didn't even think about making a note to anyone.

    we need to at least have a background explanation where we explain how we are orphans who hide from the government agencies who would force us to go into foster care and how we have no other friends who would care.

    idk. i just made that up.

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  10. @Sky- Oh, I see, I would love to -be- in the story! Something along the lines of science as you said. Perhaps some early greek that actually helped write one of those ancient math books. I refuse to believe it was only males coming up with those concepts, some of them must have been girls writing under pseudonyms. So, being in the past would be fun! Or you can make me in the present, whatever you want. :)

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  11. @gummy: oh, too late to change that now...I guess I'll work on that later? :D

    @feathers: um...greek? what do you want me to do, rewrite history? :D no, in the next part, you get to be the evil mad scientist who invents strange stuff and terrorizes people. Wait, you're too nice to terrorize people. Then I'll steal your inventions and begin to terrorize people. :D:D:D jk jk, seriously though, the story is going forward in time, i think, not back. unless you want me to drag the story out even longer...like, longer than longcat...^_^

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